📚5 #BigJuneReadathon
WHY did we time jump again? Events in the last book which came out 1 year apart are several years ago.. with nothing in between it takes away from Kay‘s mentality, Lucy‘s “issues” & the return of an arch-nemesis. Botched a perfect hurt/comfort scene. trying to paint Lucy as a drunk when everyone else travels with a bottle of Dewars: pot/kettle. All the character development with Marino 🚮
Pacing & twists saved the story. ⬇️