pan#UnpopularOpinion
Insta-Lust, flat characters
This was the third or fourth book by this author that I tried. I actually stuck this one out to the end, but it was tough.
The male narrator sounded like way older than the character, who's in his mid-thirties.
More #LitErotica than #Romance
Could have benefited from more editing. ⬇️
julesG Two examples of bad editing: "The corners of her mouth turned up at the corners."; they had safe sex, the condom being rolled on took up about a paragraph but afterwards he used his ??? as lubricant to get her off again??? 2y
julesG I know, I'm picky. I should just turn my brain off. 2y
squirrelbrain Ew, TMI for the second point! 🤣 2y
dylanisreading The spoilers made me laugh. 😂 2y
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