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Well, shucks. So many promising angles to the premise, the world-building, the messaging, but - I hesitate to call it messy - it just feels like it kept cutting itself off. One plot line would be interrupted by another, in theory a new development, the same characters, but it often felt like the characters were privy to more than the reader was, and not in a way that was purposefully mysterious, and later revealed. 1/?