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It had some okay moments. Weber overuses several words, such as "feminine” and "sensuous." Some of the metaphors were so bad that it made me laugh. It reeked of a lack of creativity. It starts out as an homage to femininity, and as it progresses, it‘s obvious that it's about one female. It felt like I was reading the same poem over and over, and I found myself rooting for some serious heartbreak, just for a change of pace. 2 out of 5 stars.
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