bailed
The story needs edited. If readers aren‘t paying attention they‘ll lose track of who‘s speaking. I knew when the animals were speaming because their sentences were italicized. Corny will say she‘s going to meet someone and in the next sentence she‘s talking to them. How does she get to them, what happens along the way? There were many misspellings, missing words, or wrong words used. The romance between Corny and her boyfriend was flat.