so-soI‘m down to suspend disbelief and have fun with a Christmas plot line. But geez, this story explains the potential devastation of the late prognosis to a particular disease. Then a time warp positively impacts a life because of financial tips from the future, but somehow the reader is supposed to forget about the very specific medical tip‘s impact to the future. The holes in this writing were too obvious to ignore.
Leftcoastzen Oh dear. 11mo
marleed @Leftcoastzen Thing is, I actually liked the story. If only they better edited the discussion of the undiagnosed celiac disease because I was content to suspend disbelief for time travel! 11mo
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