Listening intently, the villagers finally realized the strange new sound came from the water. Rushing to the shore, they peered out into the fog, trying to pierce its gloom. What was this noise, and what did it bring with it?
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Listening intently, the villagers finally realized the strange new sound came from the water. Rushing to the shore, they peered out into the fog, trying to pierce its gloom. What was this noise, and what did it bring with it?
It was very descriptive. Good taste of lore.
At times not written the best it could have been as it lacked elements of suspence. Almost felt like the author was leading you by the hand through its entirety.