Broken lines, broken thoughts, broken hearts. Grief. A novel in prose poems. Oddball love. Overcute or quirky charm? Captures obsessive energy of new love (“I passed a school on the way and felt sad for all of the children who were penned in there and who wouldn‘t get to see you”). Exposed & forward, tho cloying voice grates. Odd & dear. Breakup omitted. Annapurna‘s “Florence.” 194 “It feels like expecting and remembering all at once.” 2023