bailedThe writing is just so... Writer-y. I can't stop cringing at the lines used. I almost bailed after the first 4 minutes, but hung on a bit longer to see if it got better. It didn‘t, so after the fire scene, which didn‘t make a lot of sense to me (why did he think the creature would come save him?????) I decided it was time to jump ship.
PuddleJumper I didn't get on with his other series for very similar reasons and the addition of sexual assault. Think I'll avoid this author 3mo
Kenyazero Dang! Sounds like a good thing I didn‘t get very far 😆 2mo
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