so-so
There are some nice passages and it improves as it goes but I found this uneven. Some of the story threads were far more compelling than others and some of the more fantastical elements were so superficial Kaufman could easily have dispensed with them without really damaging the overall arc.
vivastory From the description available on Litsy it sounds a little weird for the sake of eccentricity. 8y
Moray_Reads @vivastory I like weird but some of it was definitely unnecessary and a couple of times it seemed like he lost sight of some of his own devices. It would have been a tighter novel if he'd lost some of them completely 8y
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