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I wanted to bail but slogged through it. Pass. Predictable plot, bland characters, stale end. This reads as erotica, not mystery. Remove all the repetitive sentences that do nothing for plot or character development and it's 30 pages shorter. Characters were written as objectified, insipid people. Adria's quest was insignificant to her the more a romantic obsession grew for her presumed half brother. You'll read this internal monologue ad nauseum.
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