The Eye of Ksera | 
pickSuffers from an abundance of superfluous adjectives (and then, from chapter 4, unnecessary parentheses) but still entertaining.
Each chapter is prefaced by a ‘quote‘ from a history book or guide from that world which may be from more modern times (mention of tarred roads, motor cars and petrol sheds); maybe this is meant to indicate its set in the distant past but instead feels awkward.
Still reading
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