so-so
Overall, a great concept and lots of info here. It‘s a pretty interesting storyline. I know for a lot of readers, it can be a bit graphic at times too. Unfortunately, I did not think that it was well written. I felt like there were so many overkill adjectives, they spoke to each other as you would speak to a child, and it would jump from one person‘s thoughts to someone else‘s and right back again within the same paragraph.
Megabooks Oh I hate that! Swapping in the same paragraph is ridiculous IMO. 8y
aTransParentMom Oh my word. I agree. 8y
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