Some of the poems took my breath away, the prose-ier ones with longer lines, they flowed so well and sounded so natural and profound. Most of the poems had incredibly choppy short lines, sometimes just one or two words per line, which is a totally legit creative decision but made them so impossible to read for me, I found them pretty exhausting and bad to work hard to decode what they were saying, then I didn‘t remember or connect with them well.