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I liked both main characters but they were a bit similar and maybe should have a bit more unique voices.

Atmosphere was amazing! I loved this magical and a bit different world and that was probably the best thing in this book.

Writing was simple and maybe too so. This felt quite boring as an individual book. I see potential and how this series might turn out to be awesome but this was clearly the first installment.

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From the Wall Street Journal bestselling author of the Kingfountain Series comes the first novel in a bold and richly imagined world.

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I really enjoyed this book. Review on my Booklikes page: http://ilirwen.booklikes.com.

"How many millions live on this world? Each one is a person. Each one has hopes and dreams. Isn't it tragic that the vast majority are satisfied living beneath their potential?"

-Prism Cloud, Jeff Wheeler

"If you knew, daughter, that you could not fail, if you were absolutely convinced that you would succeed, what would you dare to do?"

- Prism Cloud, Jeff Wheeler

Overall a GREAT series! There's a lot going on! You will not be bored & will always want to know what happens next! A few cons: sometimes there are some wordy passages, he tends to switch character perspective right when it gets good, A LOT of religious overtones - things that are sacred to some religions are flaunted inappropriately IMO, the love relationships are not fully developed/good moments are rushed through, BUT you should still read!!!

Because I finally had time to read on vacation! I got through the first four books of this series which is absolutely wonderful :) The writer I fell in love with him for his Kingfountain series and this just continues my infatuation with his story telling and world building!!

Epic! This is how a series gets wrapped up in spectacular fashion.

Full review here: https://lostnagoodbook.wordpress.com/2019/06/14/broken-veil-jeff-wheeler/