10/15
If this story took place in another time, it would change entirely. The protagonists in the current story know their lives are full of work and have no time for
each other. If this story took place when they first became a couple, then they would constantly fight. They're not used to being apart so often. The story could also change if they're in a place where work is even farther from home. This adds onto them not being together as much.
The author for my book uses language to describe her story, however it's not common to find. But when you do, it'll bring you into the story. In page one of chapter one, the author describes the constant chaos of New York at the time by describing a brutal shootout in detail. In this shootout, a group of gunners attack. When the police come, rapid gunfire causes one officer to be hit in the shoulder, and the other gets hit right in the head.