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While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations later on (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations later on (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).

While I enjoyed the premise (it was, no spoilers, a very creative plot as far as fairytale retellings go), it would have benefitted from more editing. There were occasional mistakes that stood out. The pacing was odd at times, waxing between glossing over would-be characterizing moments, and then massively dumping explanations (particularly close to the end).