

A case of a book that was not fleshed out enough or edited hard enough & sent to publication too soon. It has a good premise & some good content for creating a solid magic system, but a lot of things fell short. Not enough nuance or subtlety to the writing & a lot of telling vs. showing. Characters were flat & pacing was inconsistent. There was too much convenience in the plot & I had a hard time caring about a story with no risk. Disappointing.