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Heartrending, aching work that feels so timely and important. Every line strikes in the gut, relatable in its despair mixed with longing. The verse is sonorous and the metonyms interesting. Burrow into it and explore.
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Heartrending, aching work that feels so timely and important. Every line strikes in the gut, relatable in its despair mixed with longing. The verse is sonorous and the metonyms interesting. Burrow into it and explore.
Like flowing water,
I will come to you.
Like alcohol dissolving in water,
like nicotine congealing in alcohol,
like caffeine coating nicotine,
I will come to you.
Like syphilis germs flowing through veins,
like death gripping life.