I loved the first half of this, it was a really cool concept and world build that im assuming carried on from Vurt, and the key characters were interesting, but then the second half kind of lost it. Dreamscapes are cool when they're weird, but this one didn't hold in the story, and Persephone didn't need to be ... any of that. And maybe this guy needs to make some vent smut with everything ELSE he was throwing in.